I wrote a song tonight, just to kill time...let me know what ya think...be honest....hate/rate/criticize...whatever...
"She-beast of Coth"
Behold,it is I
the doomsayer of the past
as I look towards the sky
all things come to pass
with a wave of my hand
the day becomes night
time becomes like sand
blowing thru the winter light
I whisper her voice on the wind
shivers of ice tingle my spine
she is the evil of sin
my soul is the feast which she dines
(chorus)
She's the queen of the dammned
the witch of coth
the slayer of man
the mistress of soth
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She beckons to me in my dreams
nightmares of blackness and death
witness my pain, as the little one screams
I breathe my last breath
darkness dances on my grave
devils and witches,in delight
there's no-one who can save
me from this gruesome sight
she devours my soul
and bathes in my blood
she is man's oldest foe
born of the bastard love
(chorus)
She's the queen of the dammned
the witch of coth
she's the slayer of man
the mistress of soth
Not too bad. Now come up with the music to go along with it, so we can hear it!
13 views and no replies, where's the metal heads at?.....
well, I wrote another song, try thus one......
"Mental Mayhem"
The doctors sedate me...say it's for my own good
they strive to perfect me...to make me sane..
they dont know me...like they should
it only makes me...wanna spread my pain..
they lock me up and throw away the key
hidden from within the walls
my mind will bend them,and make me free
everything around dies and falls
the monster inside me....tears my flesh from inside
the creature beside me...listens to my screams
the room encloses me....I cannot hide..
everyone betrays me...and they rape my dreams..
(chorus)
I'm living in a Mental Mayhem
hell is my home
Just like in Salem
death is my friend
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they dont need me....they want my blood
they dont see me....like they would
they dont hear me...their ears full of mud..
they dont touch me...even if they could..
they dont love me....just throw me away
they never visit me....let him die
I dont wanna be me....I wanna leave today
Please dont fear me.....I dont wanna cry
(Chorus)repeat x2
I'm living in a mental mayhem
hell is my home
just like in Salem
death is my friend
Quote from: The Creeper on May 28, 2010, 01:25:17 PM
Not too bad. Now come up with the music to go along with it, so we can hear it!
looks like we replied at the exact same time, cant do music...need a band for that.
I'm just the singer ;D
Love that Talent here!
I've been wanting to incorporate a barbershop version of "Worms Crawl in..." (I forget the actual title), and would love to find someone to do an arrangement. I've got a group interested in recording it, but they'd like an arrangement.
This is for my home haunt, to be used for Vultures which I'm creating.
OG